Thursday, March 13, 2008

Pretty Woman


Written by- Kumar

http://www.poemslovers.com/love_poems/desired_love/poems/1123.html

Pretty Woman

Who is this strange girl that i saw just now,
she seems to break into my heart, if I don't allow,
everything about her seems to attract me so much,
a feeling that seems sweeter than my mothers touch.

she has got some magic in those enchanting eyes,
one look is enough, like the bird my heart flies,
it seems a star is walking down on this earth
shining gracefully to take away my breath.

As she slowly walks, the earth seems to shake,
i feel the earth is dancing to make me awake,
to let me know, the angel walking on this earth,
to tell she is one I was waiting from my birth.

Seeing this angel even the stars seem to wink,
even the all mighty sun is running way to sink,
every night she is taking control over my dreams,
like a god controlling this universe it seems.

i think of giving a flower to her, hour after hour,
then i wonder, how can I give a flower to a flower,
what should I give to let her know my feeling,
i can't give my heart, which she is already stealing.

Fate has got its own plans for every ones life,
Only the time will tell, whether she will be my wife
Whether she is going to my girl or me her man,
for now she is only one i call "The Pretty Woman"



I selected this poem because it talks about a man who finds this one girl attractive and can’t stop thinking about her. Some stuffs I found interesting are that he wants to say something to her, but he just can’t do it.

The title is Pretty Woman, and throughout the poem, he talks about this one stranger woman he saw and can’t stop thinking about her.

The author uses hyperbola a lot because he says that this pretty woman is breaking his heart, her walk is shaking the earth, and the star is blinking, which are all exaggerations. He also uses metaphor, calling the girl a flower. They make the poem more romantic and shows he likes her a lot. It creates a romantic feeling and teaches me some good lines.

The tone is calm and sexy. He says they were meant be with each other since birth. He says she stole his heart and she is like a flower.

Wednesday, March 5, 2008

me, a writer??

To speak the truth, I am not much of a writer. But if I put my mind into it and put some time into it, I can be a pretty good writer. I try to make my story funny and interest the audience. I don't read very much, but I really like the Harrry Potter series. I don't know but for some reason, I really like all the Harry Potter books. they interest very much somehow. They take me into a diffrent world where anything can happen and where justice prevails. I don't write much, but I like to write short stories. For the Mr. Miles final presentation, I put some time into it, and it interested the audience and it was pretty funny. I don't write much, unless I am told to do so. I like comedy type of writing.

A person I want to meet is Kobe Bryant.